Fic: The New Guy

Tuesday, September 30th, 2008 08:55 am
delphia2ohohoh: (Slashgoggles byAmnellWyvern)
[personal profile] delphia2ohohoh
A little bit of fic that occurred to me as I showered. Inspired by this fic that was recced on my flist this morning. (Thank you reccer [livejournal.com profile] thenightsfall  and writer [livejournal.com profile] jd_junkie )


The New Guy

By delphia

 

SGA snippit with SG1 overtones

G rated (quell horrors!)

 ~~*~~
“Is he ready?” asked Sheppard.

 

“As much as he can be given the time you’ve given us,” Zelenka answered, snapping shut his laptop and pulling the cable from the PuddleJumper’s guts. “We’ve gone over the basics for now and he’s been assigned to a group for the rest of the mechanical training.”

 

Sheppard looked over the raw recruit as Radek excused himself, obviously not wanting to hang around. The guy seemed a bit chunky, on the soft side and had a goofy grin that spelled moron to him. Curse the system that vetted these greenies. He opened the personnel file and looked over the resume summary. “So, you tinker with motorcycles?”

 

The goofy grin melted into a blue-steel glare and Sheppard saw the first hint of a man who’d been a soldier and then a top-notch cop and now realized he was being insulted. Maybe not quite a moron. “No, I build them from scratch. I can tear down and re-build a Hummer too. And a naquadah generator for that matter, thanks to my girlfriend.”

 

“Yes, girlfriend. Well, I don’t care who she is; you get no special favors here.”

 

“Don’t expect any, Sir. I’m here to do a job. I qualify and I learn fast. My personal life is my business.”

 

Sheppard nodded. Maybe he’d work out. Or maybe he’d be shipped out next time the Daedalus docked. Better for them all if he did stay since he had the Ancient gene in spades. “Okay, Shanahan, let’s go fly a Jumper.”

 

The end.


Date: 2008-09-30 05:34 pm (UTC)
sid: (Puddlejumper)
From: [personal profile] sid
"Pete goes to Atlantis"!

I wonder if anyone else has come up with that idea? There must be a few die-hard Sam/Pete 'shippers that cried when she got assigned to Atlantis.

Probably the entire DeLuise family has the ATA gene in spades. ;-)

Date: 2008-10-01 06:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delphia2000.livejournal.com
This fic has the double bonus of not only making the S/P shippers happy, it pisses off the S/J shippers. :o)

Date: 2008-10-01 06:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_minxy_/
Heeeeee! No kidding? Pete gets no respect, man. This is a nice new start for him.

Date: 2008-10-01 07:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delphia2000.livejournal.com
It think they make a cute couple and eventually, he and Sam will pick out that house together. :o)

Date: 2008-10-01 07:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jd-junkie.livejournal.com
Yay! They do make a good couple. Go Shanahan!
::iz delighted to have inspired*

Date: 2008-10-01 10:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delphia2000.livejournal.com
It's the mark of a really good story that it can say so much and yet leave some things to the imagination. You're an awesome writer! Thanks for sharing your work!

Date: 2008-10-02 11:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jd-junkie.livejournal.com
What a lovely compliment, thank you. :-)
I'm currently going back through my journal and doing the tagging thing (tedious, or what?) and trying to be more organised about archiving.
Glad you enjoyed that one. :-)

Date: 2008-10-01 08:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spacemonkeyphd2.livejournal.com
Cool beans Pete goes to Atlantis!!

Date: 2008-10-01 10:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delphia2000.livejournal.com
He'll do well there. Wraith aren't any scarier than Gou'alds. :o)

Date: 2008-10-05 11:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] msbeata.livejournal.com
Oh nice!

I liked Pete and wanted to shake Sam for hurting him.

I mean, come on Sam, take the man who is head-over-heels for you and quit pining over one who is SO not interested.

And look, he followed you across galaxies. (not in a stalkery way either)

Date: 2008-10-05 09:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delphia2000.livejournal.com
I just wanted to smack the writers for taking a good character and making him stupid.

In my universe, she invited him to apply for the job when she found out she was getting the Atlantis job. :o)

Thanks for reading!
Edited Date: 2008-10-05 09:32 pm (UTC)

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